This is the first treatment which was produced by Andrew Adedipe which was given a 8/10 becasue it was really detailed and showed what we wanted to achieve from our documentary.
This is the second treatment which was done by me and was given 6and a half/10 because there were some good points but lacked a sense of direction.
The final treatment was done by Alex Lesurf which was give 5/10 because it felt like more needed to be said however he did have a introduction.
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