After many changes we as a group altered the documentary according to the feedback given previously by our teacher and things we hadn't done. We addressed the problems that had occurred with the subtitles and now its a lot easy to understand and the writing is really clear and bold. In the feedback people also talked about the silence towards the beginning which has now changed and we have now put in an African piece that I composed in order to make this section sound a little lively rather than silent throughout. Rather than ending the documentary with a guy rowing we decided to cut that out because no body actually understood who the rower guy was and, why he was there and so it looked really random so instead we added a strong quote to talk to our target audience and people in general.
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